Score Radar
Overall · 7.4 / 10 · band Strong
Philosophy consistencyPhil. cons.
8/10
Strong
Visual hierarchyHier.
7/10
Strong
Detail executionDetail
8/10
Strong
FunctionalityFunc.
6/10
Functional
InnovationInnov.
5/10
Functional

## Dimension reportsEvidence per axis

Philosophy consistencyPhil. cons. · 哲学一致性
8/10

The 9-slide rhythm reads as a single direction (Monocle Editorial) from cover to close. `chrome` vocabulary stays in one register: "A Talk · 2026.04.22", "Act II · 04 / 09", "Page 06 · 金句". The drift is the `kicker` on slide 5 — "Act II" is good, but the slide title "折叠" is a one-character display word that competes with the Act number for eyeballs. Worth tightening.

Keep The chrome / kicker / foot vocabulary across all 9 slides — it's the deck's identity.
Fix Slide 5: bump the kicker to "Act II · 折叠" or shrink the display title to clear the hierarchy.
Visual hierarchyHier. · 视觉层级
7/10

Hero pages (1, 5, 7, 9) are textbook — display serif dominates, `kicker` and `meta-row` recede. Body pages mostly hold up: stat-cards on slide 2 use `.stat-label` (mono small) → `.stat-nb` (serif large) → `.stat-note` (sans body), three tiers, no collision. The miss is slide 3's `callout` — its left-rule competes visually with the `.h-xl` heading because both sit at the same x-coord and similar weight. Eye doesn't know if to read heading-first or quote-first.

Keep Stat-card 3-tier structure on slide 2 — copy this everywhere.
Fix Slide 3: indent the `callout` by `2vw` or push it below the lead so it visibly belongs to a lower tier.
Detail executionDetail · 细节执行
8/10

Magazine-grade in places — every `.foot` aligns baseline-to-baseline across all 9 slides; `.meta-row` uses one mono spec throughout (`.16em` tracking, uppercase). Pipeline on slide 4 keeps perfect grid even when column count drops to 3. Two real misses: (1) Slide 3 image-slot uses `aspect-ratio:16/10` but the placeholder text inside is centered which makes it look hollow at viewport widths ≤ 1100px; (2) the dot-nav at the bottom overlaps the foot text on slide 5 because the hero centered grid eats vertical space.

Keep The mono `.foot` spec — it's the deck's grace note, do not change letter-spacing.
Fix Slide 5 hero grid: cap inner content at `min-height:78vh` so the foot stays clear of the dot-nav.
FunctionalityFunc. · 功能性
6/10

Keyboard / wheel / touch navigation works correctly inside the host iframe (verified: ←/→/PageUp/PageDown all advance). ESC opens the index overview, dot clicks register. Big miss is the example ships without real images — slide 3 shows a dashed `.img-slot` placeholder where a product screenshot belongs, which is the right call for an example file but means the user can't judge how the layout holds at full fidelity. Second miss: `iframe` sandbox is `allow-scripts` only in the example card, so the WebGL background loads but the dot-nav inside the iframe takes a click before keyboard nav captures focus.

Keep The 5-bug-fix nav script (real scroller detection, capture-phase listeners) — proven and stable.
Fix Add a `data:` URI placeholder image (1×1 colored gradient) in the example so slide 3's layout reads at any width.
InnovationInnov. · 创新性
5/10

Innovation is intentionally conservative — this is a port of 歸藏's guizang-ppt-skill, and the value proposition is predictability, not novelty. The dual WebGL background (Holographic Dispersion on dark, Spiral Vortex on light) is the one earned moment; the cross-fade on slide-theme transitions is subtle and well-timed. But everything else (layout vocabulary, chrome / foot pattern, theme presets) is faithfully replicated from the upstream. There is no "lean-forward" surprise that makes a viewer screenshot a slide. For its declared purpose (Monocle Editorial direction), this is appropriate. For an AI demo-day deck, it's a missed opportunity.

Keep The dual-shader cross-fade — it's the only "magic" the deck performs and it earns its keep.
Quick win Add one typographic moment per deck — e.g. an oversized italic `em` kicker that breaks the grid on the closing slide.

## Action listsKeep · Fix · Quick wins

Keep don't break it

- The 9-page rhythm: `hero dark → light → dark → light → hero light → dark → hero dark → light → hero light`. It's the gold standard.
- Dual WebGL backdrops + the `1.2s` cross-fade between dark and light slides.
- `chrome` / `kicker` / `foot` vocabulary — they carry the Monocle direction.
- 3-tier `stat-card` on slide 2 (`label` → `nb` → `note`).

Fix P0 — visually expensive

- Slide 3 callout indent — currently competes with `.h-xl`; push 2vw right or below the lead.
- Slide 5 hero centered grid — cap content height at `78vh` so foot doesn't overlap the dot nav.
- Slide 3 add a `data:` gradient placeholder image so the layout reads at narrow widths even without real assets.
- Slide 5 kicker / display: pick one to be primary — currently both fight.

Quick wins 5–15 min, high signal

- Inject `data-screen-label` on every slide for accessibility + grep self-checks.
- Add one oversized italic en moment on the closing slide for typographic surprise.
- Move the `#hint` overlay from `opacity:.4` to `.55` on hero pages — currently invisible.
- Add a print stylesheet (one slide per page) so PDF export carries the rhythm.